the syllable count is just straight up incorrect (game-modes has 2, spi-der-verse has 3. how do you fail at counting to 3?)
it fails to make a properly assonant wordplay (what's the relation between the words spiderverse & gamemodes? how do they sound similar? someone didn't read up on their literary devices)
it fails to describe the tournament itself (how are we going "into" these gamemodes? we went into them 5 years ago. they're already here)
the word replacement "gamemodes" has been used three times already in past overcast & stratus tournaments (goblet of gamemodes, rogue gamemodes, return of the gamemodes. painfully unoriginal)
these points in mind, i propose a new title with almost none of these flaws:
Stratus: Into The PlayersVerse(eachother on conquest, dtc, dtm and ctw maps)
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